@synu if Q and Sean approve id like it to end up on the darling. First time writing anything erotic. Dialogue is genuinely hard to write. I can write internal dialogue well but I can’t really have a conversation on the page.
Moving forward I’m going to just avoid plot dialogue. It slows down the flow. Unquoted conversations are easier. Either way the more stories I write I think the better my mind will become. The better those skills will also become too.